Grading....
Media Language .. C B B B B B C C C C B
Conventions.. B B A B C A A A A B B
Creativity .. B B B A A A B A B B B
Attention to Detail .. C C B B C C C C C C C
Technical Proficiency .. B C B B C B B C B C C
Positives ..
Cinematography .. > Good Close Up Shots
> Panning
> Good use of different shots
> Range of zooms
> Good Framing on certain scenes
> Continuos flow
Mise en scene .. > Follows the conventions very well
> Each character has a setting related to the genre
> The school setting was established well
> Stage connoted talents
Lighting .. > High key lighting showed naturality
> Bright and influential
> High key lighting related back to *HOPE*
Sound .. > The diegtic sound was clear to allow the audience to hear the performances.
NEGATIVES ..
Cinematography .. > Use tripod (wobbly/shakey)
> More use of cutting on characters
> Less Zooms
> Less Pan
Mise en scene .. > More Building/ city shots
> Show more of the environment
> More Variety of setting
> More creativity of setting
> More facial expressions
Lighting .. > Too dark sometimes
> High key lighting- more glamorous
Sound .. > Use microphone at all times
> Catch sound sepreratly
> More music (up beat )
Conventions matching Audience ...
> Use crowd lines
> More funny auditions
> More shots of the setting
OPINIONS ..
More things in production ...
> Love Interests
> Real Acts
> More narrative to be showed
> Dancing
> Rapping
> Show variety
> More rivalry (Violence)
Suggestions .. > Swipes would be good
> Use no more than two soundtracks
> Use quick cuts
> More dialogue
> Happy Music
> Voiceover
> Fast cuts
> Fades
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