Feedback on our Pitch By Suhu ... =]

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The presentation of the pitch was good and unique as each of us had a point and elaborated on it which made our presentation skills better and made out presentation stand out from all the other groups. What I also liked about our presentation was that the extra features that Tasha made was incredible because that was a little sample of what our narrative will breifly consist of and due to that it gained a good reaction from the rest of the groups.

EBI-
To make the characters positions in the film abit specific, but not giving away that much.

->Talk about how exactly the film will target older audiences.

-> To make sure that the film can have features that will engage our target audience prefrences.

->To make sure that each shot in our trailer will have a meaning and engage our audience's attention.